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Boxes and labels (a poem)

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
Im not a jar,
But i do like to jam,
Im not a tin,
But im full of beans as much as any other man,
im not a bottle,
But im high on spirits, stretching my wing span
So why then the label?
You cant buy me from Nike,
Sick of being judged,
About time I got on my bike,
To go for a hike,
To the land of no frills people,
Where things are real
and its no big deal
cos we've all got our different appeals

So throw away the label,
Ban them from the table,
Dont stick me in a tick box,
Im a person not a fox,
Indivuality
Will no longer be deprived for me!


(this is just a little poem i wrote about people being labelled. What do you think? rubbish, eh?)
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SWEETENSPICYXXX

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Not being a poetry type of person myself, I am not really quealified to judge it's literary merits, but at least it rhymes <IMG SRC="smile.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> (a prerequisite for a good poem as far as I am concerned <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon">)

    Is it possible to go for a hike whilst riding a bike?
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Like the idea behind it <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon">
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I generally despise teen poetry, but I thought that was quite good (from a personal not a 'write all over it in red pen' point of view).
    I like the idea behind it but the 'box' fox' rhyme doesn't really work for me.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miss Quoted:
    <STRONG>I generally despise teen poetry, but I thought that was quite good (from a personal not a 'write all over it in red pen' point of view).
    I like the idea behind it but the 'box' fox' rhyme doesn't really work for me.</STRONG>

    i wrote it and i thought it was crap...lol. I've written a lot better anyway! <IMG SRC="smile.gif" border="0" ALT="icon">
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    WELLBUTRIN LAWSUITS
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Kentish:
    <STRONG>Not being a poetry type of person myself, I am not really quealified to judge it's literary merits, but at least it rhymes <IMG SRC="smile.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> (a prerequisite for a good poem as far as I am concerned <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon">)

    Is it possible to go for a hike whilst riding a bike?</STRONG>


    course it is! i think...lol
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    LovelyWendie99
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by deeby doo:
    <STRONG>Like the idea behind it <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"> <IMG SRC="biggrin.gif" border="0" ALT="icon"></STRONG>


    thanks. i might put up a few decent poems from my anthology!
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    FIX PS3
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