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BillieTheBotBillieTheBot 🤖Posts: 8,658 Automated Account
Hope you all like


In the end i received that which i came to give
The caring attention, that small clover leaf
Picked from the grass where we first did meet
Somewhere down there stuck to your feet
Beauty in dirt, something so simple and sweet
You might have ditched me, one thing you will never do
Is rid me of my memories of me and you.


and another one for the politics thread posse

Here they come to tell us a story
Something odd about my northern glory
Wish they would make it clear?
What it is that they find dear?
Then perhaps we might know
What makes them tick or tock
As forceably or gently, we'll do it now
Then show us why you want it to be
To rise up and take a bullet for morality
Nobody does it these days anymore
Except with political correctness
Where the PC police keep score
Beep boop. I'm a bot.
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  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    thats damn good.....

    can i add one??
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    feel free to add
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Here im wandering back and forth
    Trying to see what is in my head
    Do you think you can, not sure if you could
    Or even that a kind person like you should

    Just try it if you must, in you i did trust
    Not many have attained that before
    The last one that did betrayed me
    Before i luckily lost that which i abhor

    The darling sweetness that makes us all scared
    For all the wish you were here's,
    And the too good to be true's
    At the end of this did i ever want you
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    choosing not to choose is a choice on it's own so fuck the system and roll up a cone :D
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    A long one i wrote about 6 months ago:

    Let’s get away from here
    Just go for the sake of seeing something new
    Let’s get away for the day:
    Just me and you
    Let’s get a boat
    Sail out into the sea
    Float in euphoria
    Just because we are free
    The sun is dancing on the waves
    The wind in my hair
    Your eyes on me
    We can go anywhere
    Because we are free
    Ditch the map
    Just take the boards
    Let’s go surfing like the old days
    Sleeping on deserted beaches
    Eating fish that we caught
    This isn’t just a bubble of happiness:
    This is life
    Like it’s meant to be
    Happy and free
    No frills
    No appendage
    Just you and me
    And we may get lost or cold
    But we saw the ocean today
    With it’s waves crashing white
    Sounds like liquid dynamite
    Diamonds in the sea.
    And we can sit there all day watching the sea and sky metamorphose
    From the dancing flames of sunrise,
    The aqua luminosity of the day
    The rainbow spirits of dusk,
    The cherries jubilee of sunset
    Changing to the maps and stories of the old world.
    You, me, the campfire and the stars
    A few sweet melodies
    I stare into your eyes
    I’m intoxicated with this universal love
    An angel is freed
    That angel is me
    The cage of fear has been broken by you:
    I'm coming out
    Now come fly high with me
    See the earth from space
    This is what life is meant for
    This is what life is about
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    i like
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    MrG wrote:
    i like
    yeah?? people keep on saying my stuff is all teen angst stuff....i don't see it...

    this is another one....started as a song....again long....sorry.

    Sit by the window
    Watching my own refection
    And the raindrops falling on the pain
    Like the tears of young lover,
    Encrusted in unspoken tenderness
    Words that cannot be uttered
    Like the rose bud that will never open…
    Aptitude never reached
    These emotions stare back at me like my own face in a mirror
    Still no answer to the problems we all confront
    Just like those bittersweet moments
    Piano notes shatter the silence like ancient glass
    Sliver fragments scattered through the air
    But in some ways it’s still there
    I wish I could let you see what I see
    See the world through the eyes of this child
    These emotions stare back at me like the wind and the rain dance in the sky
    It all so clear
    Yet I cannot touch the truth
    Still no answer to the problems we all face
    Just like those bittersweet moments
    Piano notes shatter the silence like ancient glass
    Airborne quicksilver
    But in some ways it’s still there
    The pure is the imperfect
    The flawless the flawed
    Like the rose fresh from the rain
    Incompletion from god.
    Maybe we are all prisoners of our own souls
    A prison with endless boundaries
    Swallows you whole
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    yeah?? people keep on saying my stuff is all teen angst stuff....i don't see it...

    i dont care if it is or it isnt

    i do often find i like things without having to relate to them
    and im liking what im seeing
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    cool...thanks for that...people seem to type cast my work and seeing as so much of it i'm using as material for my band (not either of these 2 but other stuff i've written), i feel like it needs to be that much better.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    my stuff gets used to help people create music, sometimes they change the lyrics and then sometimes it just inspires them from the music they have created from looking at my words

    end of the day they recognise me as helping, but its not my work if they change it, but i dont mind them doing that
  • SkiveSkive No discipline. No morality. No respect. New ForestPosts: 15,247 Skive's The Limit
    turlough wrote:
    choosing not to choose is a choice on it's own so fuck the system and roll up a cone :D

    Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a bag of E's
    they got to the top
    they necked the lot
    and now they're on their knees.

    That's my superb contribution. :D
    Weekender Offender 
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    poem corner should have f**k all to do with serious or not, creative should never be constrained in any form what soever

    thankyou for your contributions
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Me looking at you

    With your twilight eyes

    That pierce the dark

    And banish thoughts

    Of fear and doubt

    That shining hue

    The brightest sky

    Does not compare!

    They watch me slowly

    And I see myself

    In deeper visions

    That look beyond

    Your eyes and mine

    To a Truth that lies

    Deeper

    And a heart that loves faster

    Than I can blink

    Than I can do

    Me looking at you
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I'm sitting here browsing TheSite
    And man, it's a load of old shite
    The threads here are dull
    So i'm supporting a cull
    Of all those who post here at night
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    As I sit here, my computer he's broke
    And I reckon he's had him a stroke
    The screen is all fuzzy
    And the keyboard is buzzy
    And I think I can see some black smoke
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    MrG wrote:
    Hope you all like


    In the end i received that which i came to give
    The caring attention, that small clover leaf
    Picked from the grass where we first did meet
    Somewhere down there stuck to your feet
    Beauty in dirt, something so simple and sweet
    You might have ditched me, one thing you will never do
    Is rid me of my memories of me and you.


    and another one for the politics thread posse

    Here they come to tell us a story
    Something odd about my northern glory
    Wish they would make it clear?
    What it is that they find dear?
    Then perhaps we might know
    What makes them tick or tock
    As forceably or gently, we'll do it now
    Then show us why you want it to be
    To rise up and take a bullet for morality
    Nobody does it these days anymore
    Except with political correctness
    Where the PC police keep score
    i like mucho mr G! ...
    dya plonk an insro ayt ll ...cos if you do ,l.\/....let me do the lyrics.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    i dont play an instrument
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    MrG wrote:
    i dont play an instrument
    then let us all play with you lyricas and get bak to yoiu/.,m
    \
    goodd lyrics G a new side to yoooo!
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    feel free to use them, and tinker with them a bit if you need to a little

    if you create some lovely music either because of these lyrics, or i inspire you, then the least you could do is give me an audio file if you can manage and then i can listen :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    MrG wrote:
    feel free to use them, and tinker with them a bit if you need to a little

    if you create some lovely music either because of these lyrics, or i inspire you, then the least you could do is give me an audio file if you can manage and then i can listen :)
    i will ...if youb hear nothing for months ...and then see a thread entitled mr g / it will probably be me ...and i'm learning aBAABOUTdigitaL MUSIC MAAAAAN.

    I ILKE ...AND YOU AS A FDNS h
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    The thing is, this is my way
    I don't know if it is me, or if it is you
    Someone has to release a burden to get through
    A likely story, with a common end
    A journey travelled to some place far
    Saves making a wish upon a star

    It makes it hard to see the bigger picture
    You can't stop me from seeing whats going on
    Personal feelings are always too strong
    So tell me what you think is going on

    The mind is always free
    Are you willing to see
    Questions are always plentiful
    Answers very few
    So please come talk to me
    We'll see what we can do

    Do i really want to see you
    After all the things we've been through
    Stop trying to look tough too
    I tried it and thats why i failed you

    I want to try and make my case
    See what i really need
    You were all i needed
    But were you all i really wanted

    Can i take you somewhere i know
    Anywhere you could freely go
    If you didnt want to talk
    Or even think about this scene
    Why do i still hold onto rotting dreams

    Does this girl want to make me smile
    Id rather want someone to make me mad
    Or even, when im sad, but smiling on the inside
    Helping me to get through from what i cant hide
  • Dr PirateDr Pirate Trust me, I'm a doctor Posts: 8,303
    I want to touch your bum
    Your bum is so much fun

    *forgets to make up rest*

    :D
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Note on a napkin, humour out of the blue
    Thought you liked it, and then i knew
    When you mailed back, something was up
    Except this time it wasnt bad luck
    And now you chat and talk to me
    Like i'm a kind caring person
    That we all should be
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I was standing there accross the hall
    Something wasnt right
    Suffering from shock
    Of the looks that i got
    From your smiling face

    I did not expect, to knock on your front door
    Little did i want to start to expect
    What love and attention from you i would get
    After unconscious and coming around
    From the lustful intoxication with you i found
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Im sitting here depressed and upset
    Together we sat here a long while ago
    In other places you can admire the view
    Yet it never quite seems the same without you

    We stood together, cold and on a hill
    Saw the street light yellow glow of the city
    From afar and amongst the chilled midnight haze
    We admired a city asleep, recounting its days

    Im thinking of standing upon another hill
    On the other side of town from you
    Similar to the last, it will be cold right now
    Yet that reflects myself, cold and thinking of you

    Of the social arena for which i no longer grace
    No more steps away from it i can take
    Friends, associates, acquaintances still talk
    But what i know of you is now old

    Still sat here writing on the otherside of town
    So near yet so far, at times not far enough
    You have a life and i have mine
    Interferance at this point would be a crime

    Please let me know how you are doing
    I wont feel sad or upset
    Even if you say that which many would regret
    You're not mine now, I never had the right to know
    But im inquiring, so please do show
    If in contempt, or at least how low
    Your thoughts of me go
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Time is a changing
    Life does seem so fast
    But not tonight
    Tonight i mourn

    Take a look back
    At all which has changed
    That which i have lost
    That which i have gained

    Many things differ
    Whether from a year ago
    Or a simple four months
    People drift and part

    Connections of heart are torn
    Thoughts erode and evolve
    And swirl together

    There are some people
    Who use that thought wisely
    To make their lives better

    Yet tonight im mourning
    Something i never really had
    And thats what depressed me
    I lost it, without knowing
    That i had it
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thoughts are amusing, especially when drunk
    Or simply when you are euphoric
    Do you regret neglecting a thought?
    Towards someone, do you have remorse?

    For not changing their life
    In ways of unimaginable concept

    If you think about it too much
    Then you have lost what you are looking for
    Simple things mean much, but to a few

    They are the blocks that make me and you
    Others stop and judge these facts of us

    With help you can help make up their minds
    But remember the the simple things
    That make me and you
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    who wants some cheesey teenage angst made this one up earlier.

    love is hollow, love is blind
    love is something we can't find
    love is static,love is mellow
    love sounds like a weeping chello

    hate is joy, hate is pain
    hate drenches you like the pounding rain
    hate is heaven, hate is hell
    hate is a feeling words can't spell

    love and hate,hate and love
    they are but two wings of a dove
    it spreads it wings and flies away
    leaving us two...here to stay
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    They trample and hotfoot, we sneak and we sleuth
    They carry some weapons, as do we too
    We are similar yet different, but often the same
    But i get the blacklisted till the end of a game

    Many in a circle, targets of each other
    One after another, they get smaller in number
    With devious tactics, its hard to find a brother
    Or honour amongst these do'ers of dark deeds

    You told them where you live, you always watch out
    Except for the first time, where you get caught out
    Do you inquisit, or go guard a friend
    Or go to the blacklist simply for revenge

    People deceive, and people aspire
    To be the last one standing, to win the end game
    In their hearts, they do have fire
    But it is no good if you are dead
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