If you need urgent support, call 999 or go to your nearest A&E. To contact our Crisis Messenger (open 24/7) text THEMIX to 85258.
Read the community guidelines before posting ✨
Options
The ocean is my girl. (teen poem)
Former Member
Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
in General Chat
My wet suit lies waiting
in the corner of my closet.
Like a penny arcade ride
waiting for a deposit.
For summer sun’s like gold
too good not to be spent.
Surfing waves, smelling boardwalks
I know where summer went.
You see me as a wet suit
waiting for your call.
Here for you to animate,
in love I am to fall.
But I surf not for teenaged eyes.
I surf inside wavy curls.
Unpredictable and changeable,
the ocean is my girl.
in the corner of my closet.
Like a penny arcade ride
waiting for a deposit.
For summer sun’s like gold
too good not to be spent.
Surfing waves, smelling boardwalks
I know where summer went.
You see me as a wet suit
waiting for your call.
Here for you to animate,
in love I am to fall.
But I surf not for teenaged eyes.
I surf inside wavy curls.
Unpredictable and changeable,
the ocean is my girl.
0
Comments
*scuttles off to email Dom*
I like this part the best. Its a nice poem
Very nice Right. Campaign starting. Am feeling v lyrical. Must write in verse....
and pd let me know. And if he says no. Post some stuff here. I'd like to read yours too.
Vete,
Vete sin duda,
Vete a seguir tus sueños.
Que te encuentres,
Que te diviertas,
Que vivas lo mejor.
Que no quedes triste por memoria de lo pasado,
Que no lutas mi ausencia,
Que no dejes que nuestra separación te ahogue.
Vete,
Vete sin dolor,
Vete sin tristeza.
Sólo recuérdame en tus rezas y piensa de vez en cuando en lo que pudiera haber pasado.
(ok that's random... and for another one...)
Solo quiero estar echado en los brazos de mi amor
Abrazarlo con todo el sentimiento que tenga
Besarlo con olas unduladas de emoción.
Solo quiero que él sea feliz
que me lleve siempre en su corazón
que tenga confianza enmigo
que sus hechos reflejen su amor.
Solo quiero sentir segura
Saber lo que pasará mañana
Y no dudar de que sea perfecto
Solo quiero que lo poco que quiero sea concedido
Y puedo relajarme en el conicimiento de felicidades verdaderas.
there we go.
Qualified good, carry on posting them!
I have sympathy! I have a whole stash hidden underneath my bed!
Really? Thanks for telling me that. I thought I might be the only one who does that when I'm in love.
Of course my dad said: you're in love a lot.:thumb:
No we don't like teen poetry try this site
lmao.
I liked it; well done.
Some things in life are certain
Some things in life are not
But whatever the outcome my darling
My love for you will never diminish or stop
One thing that is certain I am sure
Is that my love for you will grow forever more
Both during the day and throughout the night
My love for you will always burn bright