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How I see life (poem) x

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
in Creative Corner
Close the door day by day,
Try to push the pain away,
It turns out different to what I want it to be,
It turns to slit, slit, slit on me,
I try to eat but it turns to sick,
I feel like my mouth is biting into a brick,

I try to brush the thoughts away,
Another attempt occurs that day,
No success, yet again...


The person I used to be in 2003,
Constantly bouncing off the trees,
Screaming, shouting, having fun,
All day, everyday where the happiness shun .

The man of darkness came to my life,
Giving me the one last bite,
He took away what life is meant to be,
Took away the bounciness in me..

The body I’m trapped in,
With no happiness,
I wish i could be happy again,
Living in peace and bounciness...


What do you think? :chin:

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thats quite an interesting poem, you wrote it? Cool :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thanks, not that good at poetry though, just write it on emotions really x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Have you ever used desilot website? Saw some interesting poetry on there too.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    No haven't can you tell me the web address?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    http://desilot.com/forums/general/52104-how-i-see-life-poem-x.html
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    OMG It's exactly the same someone musst have copied, I hade never heard of the site honestly. Oh no, now what? :(, how could this have happened. Do you think I copied it? x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Where else has you posted the poem online? Did you post it anywhere before here?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I think it is someone copying our site.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    No this is the only time I've posted it. Inside I feel like screeming because someone has copied me x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    They have not just copied you, they are copying every single new thread that gets posted on this site. Just the first post though.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    It was posted on there before you posted it here.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Their site clock is wrong.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I still feel like killing them. I'm going to start a thread and see x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Nah best leave it be, we know its happening, and it has been dealt with.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    G wrote: »
    Nah best leave it be, we know its happening, and it has been dealt with.

    Oh thats really good news hows it being dealt with may I ask?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Hi troubled_youngster,

    We're looking at the situation at the moment and will let everyone know when we know what exactly is happening and how we can prevent it.

    :thumb:
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Did you write this?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    No comment x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Cool! i wrote one too, it goes like this:

    oh
    Liar liar
    oh
    Lair lair
    haven't you noticed!
    your Pants are on on fire!
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    notanotherusername! wrote: »
    Cool! i wrote one too, it goes like this:

    oh
    Liar liar
    oh
    Lair lair
    haven't you noticed!
    your Pants are on on fire!

    Who do you think wrote it? I googled it and it didn't come up with a published author or anyone.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    notanotherusername! wrote: »
    Cool! i wrote one too, it goes like this:

    oh
    Liar liar
    oh
    Lair lair
    haven't you noticed!
    your Pants are on on fire!

    The copied poem is on a site which is automatically grabbing new threads as they are created. It is elsewhere on the internet as I linked, however it was copied from this site.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    grace wrote: »
    Who do you think wrote it? I googled it and it didn't come up with a published author or anyone.

    The exact same poem is posted on another forum by a user. Another forum that 'hollyboo' likes to take over.
    Unless some creeeeeepy stuff is happening on two forums...
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    G wrote: »
    The copied poem is on a site which is automatically grabbing new threads as they are created. It is elsewhere on the internet as I linked, however it was copied from this site.

    Not what i am on about
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    .
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    troubled_youngster wrote: »
    .

    what do you mean by that?

    Edit - your reason why you edited your post?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Shes throwing a strop because she got found out again.

    It has been known who it is since well erm the begining, but Ive stopped getting dodgy PM's, and the user has generally been a lot better than they have been in the past.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    May we please leave this thread to die please?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    G wrote: »
    Shes throwing a strop because she got found out again.

    It has been known who it is since well erm the begining, but Ive stopped getting dodgy PM's, and the user has generally been a lot better than they have been in the past.

    Oh don't get me wrong, yeah i agree they have been better. I knew it was her since well yeah the beginning. But in this case i don't really care, its more the fact she stole someone else's work and tried to pass it off as hers.

    But yes. Lets just leave this thread to die and Troubled puts it.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    :banghead: Yeah lets let the post die x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Well it could well have done, but then you had to make another post.

    Just leave it be ok :)
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