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Show Me (Literally just wrote this one, completely unpolished)

MausolusMausolus Posts: 21 Boards Initiate
edited May 16 in Creative Corner
Advice and critique welcome and encouraged.
Again, I literally just wrote this one so it’s not the final draft and any suggestions are welcome

I know you’re behind the dark glass screen but i can’t see your face
I know you want me
I know you’re for me but you’re so far away
Hold out your hand
Oh won’t you touch me?
I want to show you my bruised soul

I want to hold you
I want to cry
I want to tell you it’s okay
Tomorrow you’d tell me the same thing
We could make it day by day

Wouldn’t it be
Oh so lovely?
I pray it happens one day, some time
Are we really
Asymptotic?
Will it always be this way?
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