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Poem i am super proud of

Jacob101Jacob101 Posts: 687 Incredible Poster

There is so many things I wish to say,
There is so many things I wish to do,
but all I want to do is to see you.


There was no real goodbye,
no silent cry,
no please help me,
no worries and replies.


Suicide is a silent killer,
for some it’s the painkiller,
this must stop,
It must not be an escape,
there must not be help the other side of red tape.


Whatever age, gender race, religion and sexual orientation,
We can be the next generation to help this nation,
We can build this foundation without government and corporation.


Stand up and talk, don’t let this be temporary chalk,
Please unlock and just talk, talk and talk.

''You were in the wilderness
Looking for your own purpose
Then you became a butterfly, a butterfly
I knew you always would''

- James Arthur (YOU)


  • Lucy307Lucy307 Posts: 1,171 Wise Owl
    Hey @Jacob101, just wanted to say this is beautiful and very touching x
    Treat yourself as you would treat a good friend
  • mk1881mk1881 Posts: 131 The Mix Convert
    @Jacob101, I know this poem was from a really long time ago but it's absolutely stunning in every way. Not just grammatically but the reader is able to feel an outside presence that they can relate to!!
    "But our lives will only ever always Continue to be A balancing act That has less to do with pain And more to do with beauty." -Shane Koyczan
  • fiona333fiona333 Posts: 141 Helping Hand
    @Jacob101 this is really beautiful ❤️
  • sinead276sinead276 Posts: 836 Part of The Mix Family
    @Jacob101 I completely agree that this poem is amazing (even if it is from quite a while ago now)
  • RenPRenP Posts: 203 Trailblazer
    Really beautiful poem! <3 Have you written any more?
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