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Poem i am super proud of

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 687 Incredible Poster
in General Chat

There is so many things I wish to say,
There is so many things I wish to do,
but all I want to do is to see you.

 

There was no real goodbye,
no silent cry,
no please help me,
no worries and replies.

 

Suicide is a silent killer,
for some it’s the painkiller,
this must stop,
It must not be an escape,
there must not be help the other side of red tape.

 

Whatever age, gender race, religion and sexual orientation,
We can be the next generation to help this nation,
We can build this foundation without government and corporation.

 

Stand up and talk, don’t let this be temporary chalk,
Please unlock and just talk, talk and talk.


Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,171 Wise Owl
    edited September 18
    Hey @Past User, just wanted to say this is beautiful and very touching x
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  • Former MemberFormer Member Believer in Pluto Posts: 131 The Mix Convert
    edited September 18
    @Past User, I know this poem was from a really long time ago but it's absolutely stunning in every way. Not just grammatically but the reader is able to feel an outside presence that they can relate to!!
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  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 172 Helping Hand
    edited September 18
    @Past User this is really beautiful ❤️
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  • sinead276sinead276 Posts: 1,634 Extreme Poster
    edited September 18
    @Past User I completely agree that this poem is amazing (even if it is from quite a while ago now)
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  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 203 Trailblazer
    Really beautiful poem! <3 Have you written any more?
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