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my crush
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my crush
i have this crush
when i see him i often blush
my heartbeat seems on a rush
to meet him i should dash
the moon lights anew
to bring joy as i view
reach you must i do
this ode i offer you
the night is filled with love
the stars twinkle above
my heart seems robbed
i swear i'd give all i have
do my eyes deceive?
glanced at me you did
happiness i have received
your wish is mine to give
i have this crush
when i see him i often blush
my heartbeat seems on a rush
to meet him i should dash
the moon lights anew
to bring joy as i view
reach you must i do
this ode i offer you
the night is filled with love
the stars twinkle above
my heart seems robbed
i swear i'd give all i have
do my eyes deceive?
glanced at me you did
happiness i have received
your wish is mine to give
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You don't even read the responses.
You kind of make me feel uncomfortable. People that only post about one thing and never reply.
Not the one time posters but the one subject posters.
Especially the people who only post in sex. *shudders*
Do you speak in rhymes in your day to day life?
Not all poems rhyme. Alot don't. I took (had to blah) a poetry class when I was in school. I learned that. Easy class though. Online class which made it even easier.
wow man, deep, reeaaaall deep.
thanks for ur comment. i just had this impression that i can post anything and anytime i want to. ill try to respond more. if that would make me a good blogger.
This isn't a blog, it is a message board. What you need is something like livejournal.
Sign up here and then you can post as many poems as your heart desires.
Thanks for that littlemissy - I couldn't have put it better myself
Kazuki - you might find this article on Creating your own content useful.
I read the poem 'Crush'
And far from being lush,
It gave me thrush.
Furthermore, all this stuff
is just a load of emo guff
This ain't a damn blog
This ain't live journal either
So don't post poems.
The more astute of you will notice that the last stanza is actually a haiku.
okay my mistake. should have researched a bit more. how will i be forgiven?