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write me a poem

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
write me a poem

Write me a poem,
and together we fly
Exploring the wide blue sky;
feeling the thick clouds up high

Write me a poem
and sing to me your song
The wind carries your voice;
the ballad i wished all along

Write me a poem
and let us see the world
Walk the Great Walls of China
And climb the Tower of Pisa

Give to me your thoughts
the things i long sought
And let me know if you've caught
My heart i thee brought

Write me a poem
and let us smile and stroll the bay
With the sun shining everyday
And the moon lights our way

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im not sure if this is love i feel
Or perhaps it's just a fling
But i do hope the poems i wrote might prove something
Infatuation if anything

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Wow, sorry, I dozed off there for a moment.
    I'd love to read more but I have an appt to get stung by a hornet
    do you come on here only to share your poetry wearing a bonnet?
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    my_name wrote:
    Wow, sorry, I dozed off there for a moment.
    I'd love to read more but I have an appt to get stung by a hornet
    do you come on here only to share your poetry wearing a bonnet?


    lol :lol:

    I thought it was a good poem though
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    There once was a poster, Kazuki
    Who fell of his/her brand new Suzuki
    Lying there dazed
    And a little amazed
    He/she got run over by a horde of stampeding rhinos

    I ran out of rhymes :crying:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    my_name wrote:
    Wow, sorry, I dozed off there for a moment.

    Lmao
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Jon_UK wrote:
    There once was a poster, Kazuki
    Who fell of his/her brand new Suzuki
    Lying there dazed
    And a little amazed
    He/she got run over by a horde of stampeding rhinos

    I ran out of rhymes :crying:

    Have you ever thought of getting your stuff published? :heart:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thesite thesite, it's alright ...
    But try to leave, we just might
    None of us friends
    We all just pretend
    Post all our problems, and just fight
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    BritJames wrote:
    Thesite thesite, it's alright ...
    But try to leave, we just might
    None of us friends
    We all just pretend
    Post all our problems, and just fight
    yep! i thing that about sums it up.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    a limerick,
    is quite frankly, just shit
    as is, the boring rhyming couplet
    so if you're thinking of
    writing poems, the trick
    is
    to just start
    a new line whenever
    you feel
    like it
    and pretend it's free verse
    well it
    passed me my creative
    writing module anyway
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    kazuki your meter is terrible! think about the rhythm!!!
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    my_name wrote:
    Have you ever thought of getting your stuff published? :heart:

    No I would never sell out. Thats to commerical. I do it for the kids man ... the kids and the love!
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Beans Beans,
    the musical fruit,
    the more you eat,
    the more you toot

    :D classic
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    yes i know i posted it a couple of years back!
    trouble is it's the only one i can remember fully.
    written in HMP STRANGEWAYS circa 1974.

    well drugs i've had
    and drugs i've got.
    some say they're good
    some say they're not.

    they've made me horny
    made me droop'
    have sex on my own
    and sex in a group ...yahooo!

    now sister morphine
    makes me slooow ....
    while amphetamine makes me quick ...
    cousin cocaines like pure white snow
    and of heroin i am sick.
    l.s.d is happy madness
    while hashish expands the mind.
    i'm told that alcohols
    like w w w w wanking
    it slowly sends you blind.
    now wether drugs
    are good or bad
    i cannot realy say
    i just know i like 'em
    all so much ...
    i takes 'em everyday!
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