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your eyes leave me
crying and bleeding
do you see what i am feeling
your soul has left me
hurting to know you hate me
all i have done is love you
your lips no longer kiss me
unloving every inch of me
where did the flame go
your body does not touch me
massaging me no more
having been left alone
feeling so low
your feelings torn us apart
burning the flame to ashes
does your heart bleed too
Your hands never grip me
walking and wondering
why does he not love me
its over between us
but will i ever
be loved
feel loved
or see love...
[poem by Lizaria]
- Made any poems since ur breakup or finding your love... let us read and hear about your love life. Be horribly painful or incrediably beautiful.
your eyes leave me
crying and bleeding
do you see what i am feeling
your soul has left me
hurting to know you hate me
all i have done is love you
your lips no longer kiss me
unloving every inch of me
where did the flame go
your body does not touch me
massaging me no more
having been left alone
feeling so low
your feelings torn us apart
burning the flame to ashes
does your heart bleed too
Your hands never grip me
walking and wondering
why does he not love me
its over between us
but will i ever
be loved
feel loved
or see love...
[poem by Lizaria]
- Made any poems since ur breakup or finding your love... let us read and hear about your love life. Be horribly painful or incrediably beautiful.
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i wrote this one day when i was feeling particularly emotional.
I sit and smile,
We laugh and our joy fills the room completely,
This is my paradise,
With you
I sit and dream,
Memories of happy times pass through my mind,
Thoughts of love and pictures,
And you
I sit and think,
I don’t know what to feel, to say or to do
All I see and all I hear,
Is you
I sit and frown,
I wait for the sun to shine on my life once more,
I’m tired of being used,
By you
I sit and cry,
Hating all of the pain that you have caused me,
Ever blinded for love,
Of you
I sit in red,
A pool surrounds me, a smile plays on my lips,
I am finally free,
From you
Forgotten Angel
Lying here
In the dark
The cold
Wondering what I’m doing
What I’m thinking
I don’t even know
Why do I feel so cold inside?
So empty
So lost
So hurt
Why won’t these scars heal?
Someone pick me back up
Take me by the hand
Show me the way
Back to my life
Someone come make the dark light
And dry my ice cold tears
Someone come and rescue
This forgotten angel.
I don't seem to be able to write 'poetry' though, but I am good at rhyming lol.
Ilora x
what ever happened to hellfire and his gemo club ;(
Maybe they're too busy writing poetry to post on here
Crazy by koe_182
Crazy, I'm crazy for feeling so lonely
I'm crazy, crazy for feeling so blue
I knew you'd love me as long as you wanted
And then someday you'd leave me for somebody new
Worry, why do I let myself worry?
Wond'ring what in the world did I do?
Crazy for thinking that my love could hold you
I'm crazy for trying and crazy for crying
And I'm crazy for loving you
Crazy for thinking that my love could hold you
I'm crazy for trying and crazy for crying
And I'm crazy for loving you.
I long for freedom,
Like the ribbon tailed bird
Who loop-de-loops
A breath away from the moon and stars.
no really, i don't write, i failed english :yes:
No...
I've just been busy lately and I've been spending a few weeks away from home so i'm not on much,
I'm also going through the "internet is boring phase"
You can always relate to someone else's writing, which is why we share it isn't it?
Here's a piece I wrote at a particulary sad time in my life:
"Has there ever been a day when all you've wanted to say is screw you to everything?
All those times when you cried out for help but no one listening?
Had enough, said you'd give up but you can't, because inside you care.
Why do you have to settle for second best all the time?
Yet still smile when it hurts so badly inside.
Everyone gets what they want - sometimes even what you want.
You say to yourself ... 'my time will come one day' ... but it never does - does it?
Then you're the one being blamed for behaving like this!
Like what? That you had enough and want something for yourself for a change.
Screw the world, f**k them all, nice guys finish last and that's the rule!!
'Friends' try and comfort you with philosophical views.
Ever stopped and realised none of that is true!?!?
'My day' will never come and I realise that through this.
One day just think to how I feel, imagine what it's like for me.
Don't ignore me when I'm walking down the street.
I'm human too, take a moment and listen to my views.
Don't call me selfish; don't say that I don't care.
Don't tell me I'm wrong and what you say is fair.
LISTEN to me because one day I will be gone.
Remember me when you're out having fun.
And don't say I could have the same if I only 'tried'
I tried so hard more than you could imagine, life isn't what you make it.
Sometimes it's just how it happens.
One day when I fall, maybe I don't want to pick myself back up!
I've finally had enough and you know what?
SCREW YOU!"
it wont last long :yes: