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Trapped- A Poem

DancerDancer Community Champion Posts: 7,807 Master Poster
edited April 2023 in Creative Corner
This poem is something that I have written to try and express how I have been feeling when my mind becomes overflooded with thoughts and feelings.

Trapped
Trapped and wanting to get out
Unable to escape, scream and shout
My mind is a mess
Is there a button I can press
Make things feel less insane
Is this some sort of game
Taking my breath
Overwhelming my head
The words won't come out
I want to scream and shout
But I'm trapped
Trapped in my mind
"There's a part of me I can't get back. A little girl grew up too fast. All it took was once. I'll never be the same." ~ Demi Lovato
"The way that I have found the light in my life is through the expressive arts because I know that I will be accepted for the way I am." ~ Me
"I'm going to get strong again and see you soon. " ~ Anonymous 
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    Laura_tigger82Laura_tigger82 Moderator Posts: 5,120 Part of The Furniture
    This is a really powerful poem @Dancer. You have done so well creating this. How did it make you feel when you wrote this about your experiences? :)
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    sinead276sinead276 Posts: 1,062 Wise Owl
    Your poem is beautiful @Dancer

    Hope your doing okay and have had a nice weekend/ Easter if you celebrate

    Sending hugs
    Sinead
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    Amy22Amy22 Posts: 4,023 Community Veteran
    edited April 2023
    This is a really lovely poem and I felt like I could relate to some parts of it too. Poetry can be a great way of releasing thoughts and emotions.
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    DancerDancer Community Champion Posts: 7,807 Master Poster
    Thank you so much everyone for the lovely comments on my poem. Writing the poem helped me to understand and express how I am feeling. I can find communication to be difficult but writing sometimes helps me.
    "There's a part of me I can't get back. A little girl grew up too fast. All it took was once. I'll never be the same." ~ Demi Lovato
    "The way that I have found the light in my life is through the expressive arts because I know that I will be accepted for the way I am." ~ Me
    "I'm going to get strong again and see you soon. " ~ Anonymous 
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    Laura_tigger82Laura_tigger82 Moderator Posts: 5,120 Part of The Furniture
    Really positive to hear writing the poem has helped you to understand and express how you are feeling at the moment @Dancer. Always important to have a communication method you find more manageable and that's more comfortable for you, even if that's not spoken :)
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