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The ocean is my girl. (teen poem)

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Yes, please do :)
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Yeah, definately Blonde Batman.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    its not very good but here goes.....

    This has all happened so fast & I don’t know what do,
    Though we hardly know each other I just can’t live without you.
    Being with you makes me happy,
    In your arms everything is fine,
    I only wish I knew the words to say to make you mine.
    This wasn’t meant to be soppy but it’s turned out that way,
    There are a 101 things that I wanna say,
    I cud tell you I love you in any way you choose,
    There are a thousand languages that I could possibly use,
    Je t'aime, Ich Leibe Dich, Ti Amo or Ana Maojabe Bik,
    But it’s not the words or what I say that show you how I feel,
    Just look into my eyes & they'll tell you that it’s real.
    I know that when we are alone and it’s just me and you,
    Nothing and no one can hurt us no matter what they do
    Everything about you makes me like you more,
    And every time I leave you I’m just that bit more sure,
    That you are the one who is meant for me,
    The way you make me feel it’s just meant to be.
    I can’t just give up and let you go,
    I have too much at stake,
    I know that if I lost u now for sure my heart would break
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by blonde__batman
    its not very good but here goes.....

    This has all happened so fast & I don’t know what do,
    Though we hardly know each other I just can’t live without you.
    Being with you makes me happy,
    In your arms everything is fine,
    I only wish I knew the words to say to make you mine.
    This wasn’t meant to be soppy but it’s turned out that way,
    There are a 101 things that I wanna say,
    I cud tell you I love you in any way you choose,
    There are a thousand languages that I could possibly use,
    Je t'aime, Ich Leibe Dich, Ti Amo or Ana Maojabe Bik,
    But it’s not the words or what I say that show you how I feel,
    Just look into my eyes & they'll tell you that it’s real.
    I know that when we are alone and it’s just me and you,
    Nothing and no one can hurt us no matter what they do
    Everything about you makes me like you more,
    And every time I leave you I’m just that bit more sure,
    That you are the one who is meant for me,
    The way you make me feel it’s just meant to be.
    I can’t just give up and let you go,
    I have too much at stake,
    I know that if I lost u now for sure my heart would break

    That was honestly very very good! :D
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by RiSe & ShInE
    That was honestly very very good! :D

    ahhhh thank u :blush:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Mobily's Ghost
    Some things in life are certain
    Some things in life are not
    But whatever the outcome my darling
    My love for you will never diminish or stop

    One thing that is certain I am sure
    Is that my love for you will grow forever more
    Both during the day and throughout the night
    My love for you will always burn bright

    That was very good James :D
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Yeah I liked it too. Been there.:yes:
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