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Poems
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I thought we could share some poems, I just made one up, and wondered what people thought?
It was nice to be wanted for a while.
Excitement burst
The beginning had no middle, the end.
She missed me more, sent a smiley face
Hold on, let go, round and round.
Master her, no, master myself.
It was nice to be wanted for a while.
Excitement burst
The beginning had no middle, the end.
She missed me more, sent a smiley face
Hold on, let go, round and round.
Master her, no, master myself.
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Thanks for sharing, that's really cool.
Do you write poems alot?
" So I say thank you for the music, the songs I'm singing, thanks for all the joy they're bringing, who can live without it, I ask in all honestly what would life be? Without a song or a dance, what are we? So I say thank you for the music, for giving it to me "
'' It's a beautiful day and I can't stop myself from smiling "
No I do not, and I'm sure that doesn't fit in with any rules which real poets use, but I just wrote how I felt.
That is my first poem in years, I remember about 10 years ago I was going through something bad and wrote a few, I also wrote some about the war in Iraq when that was proposed, I had them on paper but lost them (never showed them to anyone), so that was my first poem type thing since then.
I find it can help if you got something in your head, to try and make some sort of sense of it like that.
Thanks for reading