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A love poem

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
You're oh so beautiful teal blue eyes,
You're magical whole hearted smile,
The way you kiss my neck,
And for a brief second,
Your soul touches mine,
The soft touch of your hand,
On my face,
In my hair,
The perfect moment our eyes meet in a stare,
The way you whisper "i love you"
So gently only I can hear,
The deep sound of your voice,
Is wonderful to listen to,
The constant rhythm of your breath
Is music to my ears,
You pull me so tight into your chest,
It banishes all of my fears,
When I lay snuggled in your arms,
I have no need for tears.
You make me safe,
You make me smile,
You take me to a happy place,
Where nothing matters,
Because it's just you and I.
Nothings going to harm me,
Not when you're around,
My "knight in shining armour"
Has certainly been found.

But now,
I look on you from a far,
Sitting in a place of dark,
A place of creeping night time shadows,
Of evil, destruction, and hurt,
A place filled with blood and nightmares
A place in which I am alone,
A place from which,
Only you can save me.

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    :heart:

    thats amazing xx :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thankies :) I came up with the first few lines while thinking about the ex last night when I couldn't sleep... thought I'd make a poem out of it.
    Think I'm going to give him it when I see him on friday. x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thankies :) I came up with the first few lines while thinking about the ex last night when I couldn't sleep... thought I'd make a poem out of it.
    Think I'm going to give him it when I see him on friday. x
    Don't do it. You'll regret it.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I don't think I will... I've bought him a sorry present anyway, and I've always written him poems sooo, just kinda goes with it. x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Well, if it doesn't go well you know where to find me :heart:.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Thank you Franki :) I know it's probably a silly idea, but it's worth one last go to get him back... and if it doesn't work then I can cut him out my life x
  • AuroraAurora Part of the furniture Posts: 11,720 An Original Mixlorian
    Wow! Amazing poem, you sure have a talent for poetry. I hope it goes well when you show your ex, good luck!!!
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