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hmm, a thread from curly boy in this section what could it be?? :P

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,328 The Mix Honorary Guru
ANOTHER SONG! how cool am I?? :P


VERSE 1:
So it seems i'm on the road to nowhere
I see the reflections of all my mistakes
your the one i don't see there
Their sad eyes follow me and tell me
that a list of difficult reasons
shouldn't be the why for the rest of my life

CHORUS:
please reach out, i think i'm falling,
falling in love with you, so let me say
I'm 5 feet from the edge, maybe thats too far gone
But i'm falling again, falling in love with you
The thunder gives me hope in the rain
it shows me to road to somewhere
somewhere with you

MID:
Lets make this road go somewhere
because i still believe theres something
so please just stay with me
becuase theres something left
for you and me
Hold me now, i'm 5 feet over the edge
maybe i'm not to far gone

CHORUS:
please reach out, i think i'm falling,
falling in love with you, so let me say
I'm 5 feet from the edge, maybe thats too far gone
But i'm falling again, falling in love with you
The thunder gives me hope in the rain
it shows me to road to somewhere
somewhere with you

VERSE 3:
I was falling, holding on to anything
that i could reach and slow me down
You reached out and stopped my fall
Your the reason why i sing these songs
So let me just hold you now
And show you how i feel


Let me know what you think please :D

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,328 The Mix Honorary Guru
    :yippe:
    Wow, I'm speechless, wait no i'm not I said wow.

    That was a very stunning song, only if we could all write like you it would be great.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,328 The Mix Honorary Guru
    really sweet :D reminded me of something by the script
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,328 The Mix Honorary Guru
    2 stars: lovely chorus, and very good first verse
    1 wish: The last verse... it's... I don't know. I don't reaaallyyy like the "you're the reason why I sing these songs" line.

    But... You know me. I like finding faults in things, even if they are tiny faults ;) I think it's a really good song actually and I am rather jealous of your lyrical ability. Is it an acoustic song?
    Xx
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