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Eyes Open

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
When your sitting in your room and you feel all alone,
Take a drift into your creative zone,
Zoom around in cars made of snow,
Or just sit back and listen to the wind blow,
Let the sand crackle on your skin
and let the sun warm all within

So when your sitting in your room all alone,
Don't spark another bone,
Don't take another slug all alone,
Don't stick that needle into your arm
Don't bring yourself to any harm.

Don't sit in your room all alone,
Open the door and let the light in,
Go start explore and leave your worries at the door.
Late at night when your thinking alone
Sorrow and woe start to call,
Just turn your head and close your eyes
Descend to the place where worry can't go.

I used to sit in my room all alone,
Cocouned by worry, smoke and sorrow,
Never an ear good enough to borrow
No shoulder strong enough to cry on,
No light bright enough to see

But now the door is open,
No more worry haunts me.
There is light
There is hope
Just open your door to see.

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Going to try and use this poem for a song....What do you think??
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    i really like it:heart:
    if i were to hear it in a song i would listen to that song alot!:)
    :thumb:
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Aww that's really good.
    I think it would work as a song, but quite a clam one.
    Xx
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Yeah have been working on it with the guitar...Think I have it! Happy with it for my first song! Might post it on youtube...
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