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Sorry to copy you Curly_Boy but
Verse 1:
Dressed in black give your coat to the doorman
He'll look after your
**spoken** Perfection Memories Dreams **spoken**
Just don't forget to collect them again
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 2:
Are you dancing for fun or to ignore the cries?
Fraying ropes to try to climb
You'll only drop back to the floor
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 3:
Crumbling walls dripping tap
Smashed windows, Juest keep walking by
Concentrate and you'll keep together
But don't forget to lock the door
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 4:
Chip your perfection
Put it away for a rainy day
If your hands are slipping then tighten your grasp
Blow of the dust, come out from your mask
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 5:
Don't be affraid to let your
True colours shine through
Don't hide them all with grey
After all... it's just a shade
Let me know what you think :thumb:
Xx
Verse 1:
Dressed in black give your coat to the doorman
He'll look after your
**spoken** Perfection Memories Dreams **spoken**
Just don't forget to collect them again
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 2:
Are you dancing for fun or to ignore the cries?
Fraying ropes to try to climb
You'll only drop back to the floor
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 3:
Crumbling walls dripping tap
Smashed windows, Juest keep walking by
Concentrate and you'll keep together
But don't forget to lock the door
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 4:
Chip your perfection
Put it away for a rainy day
If your hands are slipping then tighten your grasp
Blow of the dust, come out from your mask
Dreams are built on tears
Verse 5:
Don't be affraid to let your
True colours shine through
Don't hide them all with grey
After all... it's just a shade
Let me know what you think :thumb:
Xx
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the only thing i would say is try to make the verses slightly longer, the way i was singing them they felt a bit short, but actually really good
Why, thank you I wrote those on a course and the lady said I MUST have a chorus and a maximum of 6 lines a verse, so I had to change it a bit, but the verses were longer before she had a go. I'll try and find the original.
imo not all songs have to have a chorus, so long as theres a decent flow in the lyrics and riffs then its a good song, i generally put a chorus in because theres something that u can go back to in every song and i use them for the basis of the middle 8
i like! but yeah a few more lines would make it even better. how do you want it to sound too? rock? ballard? rap?!
And also, it's not supposed to sound neat, I hate simple songs. My head is all over the place, and my lyrics reflect that :-)
Xx
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6dFMYZKj7M