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Somethign what i wrote

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
Tonight i finally realised how much of a prat i'd been, so i wrote this purely because i felt like it, and it made me feel somewhat better, again i just wanted to share this because it makes me feel better
I died a death tonight
In my fragile heart cracks appear
Cracks no surgeon can repair
My Once tough exterior fades and a pale shadow of a person now stands here
He can speak in but a whisper, the world does not hear him
for he is a fool and the world suffers not fools
he broke the heart of another and now he must break in turn
the cycle of all things hears not pleas and pities for no man
it shall take my heart without thought for consequence
it shall sweep away the ashes of my exterior
it will leave only the pale shadow of a man who once loved
a man who loved and was loved and was fool enough to throw it away
a man who now stands here with vain attempt to cry
but he can not cry for now he knows no emotion
his heart is broken and with it he is broken
He must now wait for time, time they say will heal
but how much time will heal and how much healing can time make?
For now my shadow will wander the pale and timeless void that only a man with no heart knows, a man with no soul, and man without feeling
Condemed to his fate till such a time that one may take pity on him
and restore his heart, with a gentle touch she will talk to him, in nothing but whispers, she sees past his mistakes, she see's the love in him, she breaths life into his heart, the cracks will melt away and for a while at least he is whole once more, he loves once more, he feels once more
But for now this image fades
he can not love
he can not feel
he is alone
alone with his thoughts
alone with his pains

alone
lifeless
ostracized
nothing
empty

alone

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    oh dear.
    i think you need a cup of tea and a biscuit young man. then off to bed for a good nights sleep.
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    SkiveSkive Posts: 15,287 Skive's The Limit
    Are you on drugs?
    ...if not you should be.
    Weekender Offender 
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    This loss...
    ...This bleeding rose betraying my heart,
    This feeling which I feel,
    A hate so strong it would win me in an arm-wrestling contest,
    Pale.
    Pale as my damn durty retched soul!
    Damnation to this nation follow my demonstration generation,
    and stuff...

    ...For I...
    ...am alone,
    ne'er to be coupled with myself and the sense of safety,
    this life is a torturing grip,
    wrapped around my neck ready to be rung.


    =

    win.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    You think you know pain? Y ou've obviously never eaten a Dorito that wasn't all the way chewed and it scratches the roof of your mouth and all the way down your throat... like the thorn of a rose that makes me bleed... bleed like a bitch thats just gotten cut by her own chip (crisp, whatever :p). That man, is pain.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by my_name
    That man, is pain.

    ...I trod on a plug the other day?...
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Capacity
    ...I trod on a plug the other day?...

    :eek: owww....
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    i stapled my own finger

    and pinned my hand to a notice board with a drawing pin

    :blush:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Shouldn't it be: "Something that I wrote" :confused: anyway, that's not important. Since we're talking about pain, I got cramp the other day in my arm :( and I couldn't move it because I was leaning on it, and if I let go I would have fallen over onto my girlfriend and my mate. So I had to bear the pain of CRAMP :(

    eta: also been stung in the eye by a wasp before, don't think it was a bee. That hurt.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    stinger, thats beautful ... and im sure she knows the pain you feel. Becasue she must feel/have felt it too .
    And you much really think alot of her to do this... some things can be recifided in the future, and r'ship can blossom again, but friendship will always be there.

    look after yourself.
    xxx much love xxx
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    . . . or something what I writ? ;)

    Bah unchewed doritos? plug sockets? You lot don't know the meaning of pain! I stubbed my toe and it really really hurts!
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Nope it's "somethign what i wrote" it was intentional

    its not really about pain it's more about acceptance, but you make of it what you will, thats the beauty of it, it just felt good to write :)

    Also pain is not dorritos or plugs, it's having Open Heart Surgery then having your brest bone wired together, only for the same wire to break and stick out of your chest not 1 week after you have left hospital, Now i know what the dude in Alien felt like!!!

    also yeah stubbing your toe REALLY hurts (stupid coffee table)

    Also has anyone ever just bumped something, it doesn't actually hurt bu you say ouch anyway?
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    Indrid ColdIndrid Cold Posts: 16,688 Skive's The Limit
    That thing (poem?) is very nice, really. I liked it a lot.
    Originally posted by Stinger
    it's having Open Heart Surgery then having your brest bone wired together, only for the same wire to break and stick out of your chest not 1 week after you have left hospital
    THAT was something I shouldn't have read... :nervous:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Stinger
    Also has anyone ever just bumped something, it doesn't actually hurt bu you say ouch anyway?

    All the bloody time!
    I also apologise to the object in question, tell me that's not just me
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by leely

    I also apologise to the object in question, tell me that's not just me

    hahaha, yeah i do that sometimes too.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Stinger


    Also has anyone ever just bumped something, it doesn't actually hurt bu you say ouch anyway?

    i knocked myself out once by banging my head on the cupboard under the stairs as i was coming out

    it was an accident :blush:
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Char_Baby
    i knocked myself out once by banging my head on the cupboard under the stairs as i was coming out

    it was an accident :blush:

    I did that on my Mates attic conversion roof, the thing sloped and doesn't cast any shadow, I stand up hit roof, fall down.......he found it most amusing lol
    Originally posted by Zalbor
    That thing (poem?) is very nice, really. I liked it a lot.

    Poem, Creative Writing, Emotional Stress relief call it what you want :)
    Originally posted by leely
    I also apologise to the object in question, tell me that's not just me

    Never apologised, but once told the coffe table to watch where it was going
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Jon_UK
    . . . or something what I writ? ;)

    Bah unchewed doritos? plug sockets? You lot don't know the meaning of pain! I stubbed my toe and it really really hurts!

    Oh fuck that hurts. I did that about a week ago and I thought I was going to die right then and there. Or at least pass out from the excruciating pain.
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