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Teen angst poetry

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    The thread was deleted

    I cry.

    I cry.

    It was deleted because nobody understands me.

    I wail.

    I wail.

    Why can't people just take me for who i am.

    I sob.

    I sob.

    You just don't understand who i am.

    I scream.

    I scream.




    Sorry, that was a freshly written piece of teen angst poetry that i have been working on for the past 2 minutes.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Wow, I feel for you, you must really be suffering.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Doofay
    The thread was deleted

    I cry.

    I cry.

    It was deleted because nobody understands me.

    I wail.

    I wail.

    Why can't people just take me for who i am.

    I sob.

    I sob.

    You just don't understand who i am.

    I scream.

    I scream.




    Sorry, that was a freshly written piece of teen angst poetry that i have been working on for the past 2 minutes.

    Pfft, what kinda poem was that?!

    There was no generic lines about dark or bleeding roses.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I believe it had something to do with the fact that my poem completely ruined it.

    Woe, woe, woe is me :/
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by bongbudda
    Wow, I feel for you, you must really be suffering.

    I'm suffering this morning.
    The windowcleaners came
    They washed my window
    They just don't care
    Who i am
    Or what is inside the window
    Where i lie
    In bed
    Wishing that there was
    Just one person
    To apply my black
    nail varnish
    And to talk about how
    life isn't fair.
    Mum, you've ruined my life
    why couldn't you just
    buy me the slipknot
    tickets.

    My new masterpiece, represantational of the gothic and rock 'n' roll genre of feeling, style and taste. I hope this helps to get my feelings on society's problems and the way that everyone should wear black clothes like me so that everyone appreciates how much of an individual i am.

    Mmmmm, teen goth mass individuality...
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Genius mate, you
    captured
    the pointless line
    changes perfectly.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Luby; Did you delete the thread, I hope not. Dont be offended.

    We only comment because we're past that age, we have realised life isnt fair and we dont fight it anymore. We're cynical old gits.

    We're jealous of your youth really. Or at least I am, maybe I could syphon some off somehow...
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Luby. I challenge you. I appreciate that you praise this shit and you are at advantage but I feel I can prove myself.

    I saw a little boy, playing with his dog, so happy...
    ...LIFE IS FUCKING SHIT!

    Nobody understands this pain like me. No-bod-y.

    Hark! I hear the sound of an artist (tortured)
    Banging his face into a wall until the crimson liquid* trickles down his mush.

    ...Silence

    On a grave I see the

    Ancient orange tint which RIPs through me like a meaningless nothing,

    Woe! I say Woe!... is me. This pain flows oh-so freely
    as it hurts and penetrates deeply and I rack and rake my brain
    with all the hurt and all the shame
    and all the people staring at me, staring pointing, saying my name,

    Stop.

    That rose is pissing out with blood** as well it bloody-bloody-should as should you see that it is bleeding - bleeding un-fort-un-ate-ly,
    for me,

    Then!

    No one can see me
    I'm ignored and invisible
    Look at her! See her standing there! Do you see her?! Does she make you care?! lmao, no :/

    I have no love, no care, no faith, no trust
    no shelter; all your bases are belong to us...

    You treat her how a raven treats a dove - innocent
    until he pecks his FUCKING eyes out so they bleed, more and more
    until the mess is incomprehendable all over my bastard patio floor
    which my parents make me clean. I hate you! I hate you!

    Why should I do what you say?! You feed me lobster and chips!
    Forget you! I don't need you!

    I wait. I wait for a fallen angel to take me up where I can rest. Where I can fly.
    But you continute to torture and suffocate me
    agonising pain, day and night
    come to me my dearest angel where we can float so high and fly
    ... as these cunts don't appreciate my art - mmk -- mmk -- kthxdi :/

    I cry. Eye win.

    Credits:
    Helltitz's past entry about crimson liquid - banging head
    Shine's proposal that every poem should have a bleeding rose

    Thanks guys! I couldn't of done this without you.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    tum tum.
    do you remember that wav file? about being goth? if not remind me to send you it again!
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by paperBprincess
    tum tum.
    do you remember that wav file? about being goth? if not remind me to send you it again!

    I shall, but at the minute the sound would be drowned out by the immensity that is Oasis. ;D
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Take this thing away from me,
    as far away as it can be.
    It looks so shap and feels so cold,
    im sorry i cant fit into societys mould.
    The pain they cause me deep inside
    makes me feel i want to die.
    Why do i bother? why do i try?
    they still treat me like a fucking child!


    I want ot die i want this to end,
    Sometimes i feel skunks my only friend.
    When i am brave, whenever this will be,
    i will use my blade and set myself free.
    Then they'll be sorry, then they'll see,
    why they shouldnt have fucked with me!


    Every time things get down,
    people wonder why i frown.
    i make out i'm happy all the time,
    if only they knew what was really on my mind.
    Ive tried so hard to be polite,
    but it only gets me into another fight.
    Why do i bother? why do i try?
    they still treat me like a fucking child!


    My wrists are acheing to be slit
    i want to slice up every bit
    But im a chicken, im a bitch
    i wish i could just flick a switch.
    Then it would be over,Then they'll see
    Why they shouldnt have fucked with me!


    :lol: why thank you \0/
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    the moon it
    calls to me through the clouds
    averting my spirit it
    sings with a sound

    'there is blood on the moon!'
    they cry, shocked and displeased.
    but i know.
    i know deep inside
    it is the tears of angels that gislten red on the crescent.

    his apology was like
    the blood on the moon.
    an apparition of sorrow
    but all it did was make an angel cry.

    hehehe
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Lubi got your number
    And Lubi ain’t your friend
    Look who took you under
    With seven inches in
    Blood is on the dance floor
    Blood is on the knife
    Lubi’s got your number
    And Lubi says it’s right
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    sigh. times lots.
    is it just me or
    should poetry
    be called
    shittery?
    anyway, this thread is old
    and cold
    and black
    black like my soul
    like skippy the goth kangaroo
    it's true
    i'm blue

    so shut the fuck up will you?
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    but,
    writing angst poetry
    though with no motionary revolutionary intentionary flow
    is fun, kaff
    fun. i wish i knew
    for i too, am blue
    fun isnt fun,
    without you too,
    having fun...

    ...so lets, me and you,
    do this over and over

    the way you deny
    was as if you were to imply
    that there was anything better
    to do on these boards
    but lies, times five
    so dont try and stop people
    as theres about two other decent posts
    out of seven-hundred and fifty two

    crying alone
    deeper
    deeper
    deeper still

    please dont tell us to stop kaff ;'(

    you wont do it again, will you?
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Roses are red...
    Violets are blue
    My life is bad
    And I feel like poo...

    Thank you very much, I'm here on Saturday nights!
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    You write goffick poetry sayin you "don't really exist"
    It's easy to be sad when you've never been kissed
    And easy to imagine the gothic funeral mist
    Truth is when you die you won't even be missed
    You're as powerful and deadly as a benign cyst
    And the only sex you'll ever have is your own right fist

    :p
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    *applauds* so good. all of you have such talent! I read those and tears slid down my cheeks. It was as though your pain was my pain, and mine yours. I was moved, I was touched.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    i do not write angsty poetry. and any thread that says so i will have deleted, even if it means getting my mate to help.

    i am a singer and songwritter and i am in the process of recording a demo tape, and many people have said my songs are great. the songwritter for the specials has seen my stuff and he said it was great.

    some people on here really get to me. i honestly don't see how i could be portrayed as a "teeny bopper" nor do i see my lyrics as "teen poetry". yes i am a teenager, does that give people right to take the piss out of my attempts to make a go of my life? music is my life, and i really put my feelings onto paper and don't hold back. and yes bong i really wish you could syphon off my youth because it's wasted, and just makes you liable to get the piss ripped out of you everytime you try and make a stand, and tell the world what you fucking think. we are no longer alowed to dream....because we must follow the sad pattern of denial and a slow and fucking painful death. i don't want that, i want to make something of my life and really do what i can to help people. the way i do that is by singing.

    ok yeah i've had a shite 18 months and i'm really trying to turn my life around. if i died now i would be happy, but in myself i am not a happy person, i am a amazingly angry, bitter and twisted i have to keep myself trained not to flip.

    i would like to thank all you ass wipes for your stupid comments and fragile attempts at making yourself feel good because you have had your daily bitching fix.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Nope. That's bullshit.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by luby

    i would like to thank all you ass wipes for your stupid comments and fragile attempts at making yourself feel good because you have had your daily bitching fix.

    Please note, my poem was aimed at Capacity, not you. Although this does not necessarily mean I'm not an asswipe.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    May I recomend you the squeezably soft? Its also abosrbant so its good for those tears of pain also.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miffy
    Please note, my poem was aimed at Capacity, not you. Although this does not necessarily mean I'm not an asswipe.

    Yes, her poem was aimed at me but neither you (luby) nor I could tell. Also, it hurt me a lot because this is a form of poetry which I dedicate a lot of time to and that I really respect; unlike luby who isn't really bothered by it at all.

    Tool.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Capacity


    Tool.

    Who, me or luby?! This could get confusing.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miffy
    Who, me or luby?! This could get confusing.

    The important thing to remember is, I was only joking. ;D

    Both of you :/

    ;p
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miffy
    Who, me or luby?! This could get confusing.
    haha i thought he meant the band
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Capacity
    The important thing to remember is, I was only joking. ;D

    Both of you :/

    ;p

    Fantastico!

    I've never used the words "benign cyst" in a poem before. *Pats self on back* ;D
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miffy
    Fantastico!

    I've never used the words "benign cyst" in a poem before. *Pats self on back* ;D

    i thought that added alot to the poem. it added the extra in extraordinary
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by Miffy
    I've never used the words "benign cyst" in a poem before. *Pats self on back* ;D

    i don't think many people have ;)


    yeah, when i was like 15, i used to think my poems were great, and that people laughed cause they didn't understand.

    now i read them and i see why they laughed.


    the trick is not to take yourself so seriously. life is funny. laugh along.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Originally posted by luby
    i do not write angsty poetry. and any thread that says so i will have deleted, even if it means getting my mate to help.

    You're gonna try and get rudeboyz to hack thesite to delete threads?

    I'm not even going to start.
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