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The roses tug at her heart...

RiverRiver Community Champion Posts: 763 Part of The Mix Family
edited December 2023 in Creative Corner
🥀The roses tug at her heart 🥀

The roses dig deep carving at her heart
The pain of the stabbing turning to nausea
With every twist and wrip she tries to keep it in
It's pulling at her heart as she tries to grip hold.

She is grasping for air as its being pulled free
She can't do this its tearing her apart
Shes heartbroken now and unable to move
It's locked around her heart pricking her at every breathe

She drops to the ground unable to take the pain
Shes done and mentally gone
It's already taken her heart and ready to take her life
She wants it to be done now so she can be free
She wants it all to go away now its stabbed her.
Slowly healing n finding the real me 🥲
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  • amy02amy02 Moderator Posts: 74 Budding Regular
    Hey @River thank you for sharing this poem with us, the imagery you create is amazing <3
  • lunarcat522lunarcat522 Posts: 324 The Mix Regular
    @River I love this poem, you really bring the emotions to life and they're really enjoyable to read <3
  • nat_nat_ Moderator Posts: 32 Boards Initiate
    @River this is an amazing poem, thank you so much for sharing <3
  • Amy22Amy22 Posts: 3,789 Community Veteran
    @River You have such a beautiful way with words and I can see how poetry is therapeutic for you specifically in the way you write it. I really loved this poem and look forward to seeing more of them in the near future <3.
    Just a person who likes pop culture and films
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