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Poems

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
I thought we could share some poems, I just made one up, and wondered what people thought?


It was nice to be wanted for a while.
Excitement burst
The beginning had no middle, the end.

She missed me more, sent a smiley face
Hold on, let go, round and round.
Master her, no, master myself.

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  • *BananaMonkey**BananaMonkey* Lyrical Poster Posts: 5,435 Part of The Furniture
    Heya LocalBoy

    Thanks for sharing, that's really cool. :heart:

    Do you write poems alot?
    " And everywhere I am, there you'll be, your love made me make it through, oh I owe so much to you "
    " So I say thank you for the music, the songs I'm singing, thanks for all the joy they're bringing, who can live without it, I ask in all honestly what would life be? Without a song or a dance, what are we? So I say thank you for the music, for giving it to me "
    '' It's a beautiful day and I can't stop myself from smiling "
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Hey BananaMonkey,

    No I do not, and I'm sure that doesn't fit in with any rules which real poets use, but I just wrote how I felt.

    That is my first poem in years, I remember about 10 years ago I was going through something bad and wrote a few, I also wrote some about the war in Iraq when that was proposed, I had them on paper but lost them (never showed them to anyone), so that was my first poem type thing since then.

    I find it can help if you got something in your head, to try and make some sort of sense of it like that.

    Thanks for reading :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    That's really powerful localboy :yes:
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