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A song.

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
in Creative Corner
You left me crying
Tears of red
You left me lying
For dead
You left me calling
Out your name
You left me wondering
Will I see you
see you again?

You took your promises
My broken dreams
And you left them
Ripped at the seams
But even if
I gave you
A needle and thread
I know you’d leave them
For someone else
To fix instead

You never could stand
On your own two feet
But I’d hold your hand
If you’d hold me
We were not equal
Not in your mind
But that don’t bother me
Not this time
I get so used to
Being knocked down
That I won’t even try to
That I don’t even try to
That I can’t even try to
Turn it around


I was going to upload me singing it, but it wouldn't let me :grump: x

Comments

  • AuroraAurora Posts: 11,722 An Original Mixlorian
    Awesome song, how long did it take you to make up?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    2/3 mins, as quick as I can type really :lol:
  • RichTBiscuitRichTBiscuit Posts: 14 Settling in
    "But even if
    I gave you
    A needle and thread
    I know you’d leave them
    For someone else
    To fix instead"

    Love this bit!
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    thankies :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    its really really good BA :)
    and thats coming from the GOD of songwriting (aren't I modest tonight :p)
    But seriously, its amazingly good :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Your opinion is invalid till I see a photo of your short hair.

    ;)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Broken-Angel wrote: »
    Your opinion is invalid till I see a photo of your short hair.

    ;)

    my opinon is no longer invalid...
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    curly_boy wrote: »
    my opinon is no longer invalid...

    Haha, trueeee. Still not going to admit you are the god of song writers though, because that is BLATANTLY me. ;)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I'm impressed! Well done! what style do you have in mind for how it's sung?
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Haha, thanks Purple :) And... Acoustic and sloooow. Sort of Karen Dolten style. x
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    :thumb: like the sound of it. The mods should find a way for you to upload a sound file!
  • AuroraAurora Posts: 11,722 An Original Mixlorian
    Broken-Angel wrote: »
    2/3 mins, as quick as I can type really :lol:
    So its just popped in your head as you were typing? Awesome!
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    **CupCake** wrote: »
    So its just popped in your head as you were typing? Awesome!

    Yea that's generally how I write, a line comes in my head then it just sorta flooooows out of me :)
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I will add a line.

    Roses are black
    violets are black
    I am sad.
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    StrubbleS wrote: »
    I will add a line.

    Roses are black
    violets are black
    I am sad.

    Doesn't fit, sorry ;)
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