A song...

Former Member

So I've not posted a song in along time, not really felt like it, I've not written a huge amount, but I've written a few. This is one of my more recent ones, its a fast paced song, sort of like moneen, attack in black style.

here it is:

VERSE:
You said I’d dream, you wanna see
I still can’t bring myself to try
I always want moreeeee
With all these things I left unsaid
While you were here listening
I Still can’t bring myself to try

CHORUS:
I’m weak, But I know what I wanna be
I’m tired, I’ve failed, I don’t wanna see
I’ll never be awake
But I want you here tonight
My hearts not a trophy for a wall
So I’ll guard it till the end
When I can let my walls down

VERSE:
You can’t take this further
I still can’t bring myself to try
we’re speaking to loudddd
I’ll try to whisper so they can’t hear
and take this to the rooftops
I still can’t bring myself to try

Mid
Run kid, don't let them stop you
the doors locked and I’m stuck in listening
to the white noise of my heart and head

CHORUS:
I’m weak, But I know what I wanna be
I’m tired, I’ve failed, I don’t wanna see
I’ll never be awake
But I want you here tonight
My hearts not a trophy for a wall
So I’ll guard it till the end
When I can let my walls down

ENDING:
I’m strong, I’ve made it
to where I wanna be
You won’t try
I’ll wait, but I won't try
wait, no I don’t want to die


Let me guys know if you like it, and if not, something constructive please

Former Member

Do you write songs often? Are you in a band? That's really good song!

Former Member

I;ve written a fair amount of lyrics, not complete songs
I'm not in a bad atm, but I'm hopefully starting one, been in a fair few but always walked away from people complaining that we're not getting gigs when they don't try to get any...

Former Member

It's a very nice song!

:wave:

Former Member

Well see I'm a concert promoter, self-employed but I have many friends that are in bands and such. Even though I'm in Canada I make friends in the US and all over. I'm best friends with this one in guy in a band, we are both big FOB fans, I promote his band in Canada to get some more fans and exposure. I like discovering bands<3

Former Member

I'm in the process of starting a band, a few guys that I've been in a band with before that I can get on with because their not lazy wankers, atm we're just missing a singer and drummer! Got synth (me) guitar and bass

You might wanna check out Kids Can't Fly for an unsigned band, love them and I'm good friends with them, epic british band