Song: Finally so alive

Former Member

OH OH OH!
more lyrics lol

VERSE:
Pushed aside I’ll always be this bitter person
who you left at the station in the dark
finally I’m so alive without you
You out stayed your welcome
You’ll never understand this game
So theres no where to run so fuck off

CHORUS:
One of us must die so make up your mind
Whos it gonna be, me or you
Exiled and hidden in the dark
I’m stuck right here and I’m disillusioned
give you some time, so make up your mind

VERSE:
Do you see what I’m made of
All I know is I’m stuck inside
You’re the only one I want to blame
Theres no way to win when love is your game
I’ll never understand this game
So theres no where to hide so run

MID:
All I know is we’re stuck right here
Straight down with some desperation
We’re stuck here with out communication
Right beneath the surface

VERSE/OUTRO:
Give me some reasons, and give you some time
make up own minds, one of us must die
finally I’m so alive
Give me some reasonssssss
Give you some timeeeee

Former Member

curly_boy wrote: »

OH OH OH!
more lyrics lol

Oh fuck no... Not MORE :yeees:

I like them, as always, BUT at the end of the verses it says: So fuck off, and So run
I think you should just leave it at so.
If that makes sense?
The first verse would be:

Pushed aside I’ll always be this bitter person
who you left at the station in the dark
finally I’m so alive without you
You out stayed your welcome
You’ll never understand this game
So theres no where to run so....

And then go straight into the chorus.
Xx

Former Member

yeah possibly, its meant to be a heavy, harder song that i usually write, sort of like maylene and the sons of disaster mixed with bfmv

Former Member

Haha!! I didn't sing it like that at all...
But I still think you should do what I said And maybe have a backing singer like scream the "Fuck off" as you start the chorus?
That'd be funky in a no funk music kinda way
Xx