more lyrics...keep finding these

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CHORUS:
I've had my heart crushed,
way to many times,
Just give me the chance
to show you what i'm about
Lets just talk about it
(talk about it)
Cos i've had my heart crushed
way to many times

VERSE:
Here i am again, I hope your listening
THat you've got my signal,
I gave up every chance i had
Just to show you what i want
Here i am again, i hope your listening
I can't pretend that i don't care

MID:
ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhh (over guitar solo sort of thing)
(cos i've had my heart crushed way to many times)

VERSE:
Here i am again, i hope your watching
That you can see me for there,
I showed you what i need
just to show you how i feel
Here i am again, i hope your watching
You can't pretend you don't understand

OUTRO:
I gave up every chance i got just to show you
You ignored everything just to feel new again
(I've had my heart crushed way to many times)

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So yeah, i found these lyrics today, i wrote them when i really liked this girl, (kinda obvious) and she didn't like me in the same way, it basically destroyed me and i tried to sum that up in the lyrics and how i was feeling at the time, i reckon these are my most personal lyrics that i still have and want to show people atm, any ideas on how to improve, i wrote it for either a band with a similar style to Paramore (doesn't have to be a , girl singer though) or for my acoustic band anyway, hope you guys like it

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I really like your lyrics, as I've said before. BUT don't be like paramore... they are shit
Xx

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i think you will find paramore are actually amazing :P plus they have hayley williams, that just wins the arguement for everything, like 2 camels and a tiny car response (equals 3 joke :P)

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I think you will find Paramore are actually evil aliens in disguise.
Xx

P.S. I like Hey Monday though

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shh you, i am technically an adult so i have the final say in this, paramore rule

Let me ask you this, do you like A Day To Remember???

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Shhh yourself... you have the final say on NOTHING. Mwa haha!

And.. I do as it happens (well the stuff I've heard). Why?
Xx

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then i can forgive u for not likeing paramore, ADTR are my favourite band, every time i see them i try to get backstage cos i'm that awesome

also i think you'll find that i have the final say in EVERYTHING, MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...wait, i havn't taken over the world yet, *runs off to start the taking over the world process* :P

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You are that awesome are you? Well ermmm *thinks up awesome story* I was the first person to orbit the world in a salt and viniger crisp packet for a full 6 seconds, while eating a shoe. So there :razz:
Xx
*might of made a little of that up*

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you might have had a bit of that up?? just slightly as my granddad was actually the first one to do that so your quite obviously the second person to do it :P

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I AM YOUR GRANDAD! So there
Xx

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i have no witty response to that

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Shame I got loads, you can borrow them for a small fee.

Do you like Secondhand serenade?
Xx

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yeah i do like them, only heard a few songs but i like em
U heard of the scene aesthetic??
Awesome acoustic duo (some eletric songs but the acoustic versions are better )

Former Member

Can't say I've heard of 'em... I'll youtube them in a bit.
Have you heard of Eric Hassle?
I don't know if he'd be your cuppa tea... but he was support at a gig I went to and I thought he was great
Xx

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nah i havn't heard of him, youtube to the rescue in a moment lol

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OH and the other day I discoverd Dance Gavin Dance. They are FTW :thumb:
I shall be posting some of my lyrics tomorrow (or day after) I've got a singing workshop haha!! So need to get writing
Xx