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A poem

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
Will anybody
Be brave enough
To reach out
And to touch
What isn't theres?

Or will we all
Just live in fear
Of the everlasting
Emotional abuse
That's from our peers?

Should we ever
Give in to hatrid
Or just let it
Carry on till death
Or what comes next?

One day maybe
We will understand
The hand that feeds
The broken ones?

Or should we just
Forget what's happened
And think about the next
And final step?

Broken-Angel xx

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I like it, but: theres line 5 needs to be "theirs" (I had to double check that as i almost got it wrong lol) and hatrid line 12 should be "hatred" xxx
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Sorry I find spelling quite hard
    Xx
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    No need to apologise for it! That's why it's good to have a Beta, someone who proofreads your work, cos they should be able to pick up on things like this.
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