yet more lyrics :D

Former Member

expect this lot is probaly my first finished song, found it on my computer earlier and was reading it though and i thought i'd post it up, i reckon it needs alot of things changed in it and will do that after nye

anyway here they are:

chorus or intro
I’m not coming back
but please just help me find
help me find my who ever
before I got home now,
help me find my who ever

verse or chorus
This feeling doesn’t last as long
as it should, it’s a Sunday
and yet I can’t remember last night
I woke up from dreaming
and started making my way past
yet I haven’t been sober for days

verse
I put on my shoes, its past 2 in the morning
I have no idea where I’m going
leaning now, into the breeze
this place seems familiar to me
its where u lead me upstairs
but left me trying to get back inside

verse
you’ve been running through my dreams
I know it seems crazy, we’ve only just met
who can deny these butterflies,
I’m waking the neighbours with unfamiliar faces
I’m dying to get inside,
in only to find my who ever
but I can’t remember who you are


outro
Isn’t it funny how it rained it all
when u shot me down
torn out my heart, crushed my desperate endeavour
so I’m not coming back, I’m leaving for ever
I’ve gone out my mind,
I’m so many thousand feet off the ground
so I guess I’ll go home now

Merry christmas and let me know what u think

Former Member

also, forgot to say i have nearly finished the recording of the acoustic EP, just editing it all together, making sure it sounds as good as it can even though i have to re do the vocals on one of them cos i did them (i can't sing...and auto tuner failed, i sound like t-pain on it, lol)

Former Member

Did you set the right key and everything? You can also choose the notes if you know which ones you'll sing, so it's more accurate (depending on how bad you are!).

Former Member

hhhmmm yeah I like it...
I feel like posting some of my songs *goes to post a new thread*
Xx

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wooooooooah wrote: »

Did you set the right key and everything? You can also choose the notes if you know which ones you'll sing, so it's more accurate (depending on how bad you are!).

yeah i set the right key and everything, and i chose the notes, i still sounds like t-pain after all my effots! lol