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New lyrics AGAIN :P

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
hey all, as you may know i've been writting alot of acoustic songs and i've done a new one, me and a mate have recorded the 1st 2 songs on our EP (ACOUSTIC BAND FTW) and i'll put a link up to them soonish :D

but i've written a new song for the EP so yeah here it is:

Its time to lay Claim

Verse 1
Its time to lay claim,
to what we started,
let me take you out,
though i know i'm,
hardly worth your time,
so pass another bottle honey,
cos this tastes just so sweet,
and i know ur not gonna stay around

Chorus (Probs not gonna be done here, thanks BA)
For docks to downtown,
we'll take the night by suprise,
we laugh about the world,
and about how its going right to hell,
Its time to lay claim,
to the evidence and what we started

Verse 2
If it wasn't for you
i know i'd tear this place
to the ground, just cos i can
this tensions like a fire,
In my grave theres room for 2
I'm gonna roll the dice
and hope for double 6

Chorus again :P
For docks to downtown,
we'll take the night by suprise,
we laugh about the world,
and about how its going right to hell,
Its time to lay claim,
to the evidence and what we started

Verse 3 (final 1)
If this keeps you around,
then i'm down, just cos,
your giving me such a rush,
(woah, woah)
your giving me such a rush,
and like a bad movie i'll drop you off
so just let me, take you out
even though i'm hardly worth your time

outro
so just let me, take you out
(so just let me, take you out)
slightly afterwards
even though i'm hardly worth your time
(even though i'm hardly worth your time)----slightly afterwards


this is the final track in the EP, and i reckon i might use the lyrics for my other band as well :D lol, i've edited it a few times but i reckon its near finish, anyone else see anything i can improve?

Comments

  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Nice, I like it. If I was you, I'd not have the chorus between verse 1 and 2, but at the start... It worked for the tune I was singing, but haven't listened to yours, my speakers aren't working. So, it might sound shit to you tune :-p but just a thought.
    Xx
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    yeah i can see what u mean, now singing it, it works way better without the first chorus :D
    thanks BA
  • Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,324 The Mix Honorary Guru
    My wonderfullest pleasure :-) I write a lot of poems... you may think that is nerdy... but... actually...There is no defense for that, it is sorta nerdy. But I'm good at lyrics :-P
    Xx
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