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My lyrics..
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what do you think??
the bands a sort of mixture of influences of bands like alexisonfire, a day to remeber but with out the screaming, we're thinking of doing that but in alexisonfire style so u can understand
heres the first song i've written for us
Lets Toast the Rich (with our favourite drink)
VERSE 1:
I?ve got to let go
Fight back instead of holding on
this system is killing us
I?ll never be the same
Nothing ever will be
let?s raise the stacks and
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
VERSE 2:
I?ve got to get out of this
good bye for a life time
theres no point in staying
when all that happens is
Just our downfall
so let?s raise the stacks
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
VERSE 3:
I?m looking at the mess
that they?ve made
We?ll make our stand
right with our friends
fuck the rich
We?ll make our stand
right with our friends
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
tell me what u think and if i can improve anything
Probaly should have put this in creative thread, my bad, if an admin could move it if they want
the bands a sort of mixture of influences of bands like alexisonfire, a day to remeber but with out the screaming, we're thinking of doing that but in alexisonfire style so u can understand
heres the first song i've written for us
Lets Toast the Rich (with our favourite drink)
VERSE 1:
I?ve got to let go
Fight back instead of holding on
this system is killing us
I?ll never be the same
Nothing ever will be
let?s raise the stacks and
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
VERSE 2:
I?ve got to get out of this
good bye for a life time
theres no point in staying
when all that happens is
Just our downfall
so let?s raise the stacks
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
VERSE 3:
I?m looking at the mess
that they?ve made
We?ll make our stand
right with our friends
fuck the rich
We?ll make our stand
right with our friends
CHORUS:
Lets toast the rich
With our favourite drink
Rise your glasses
Burn down the streets
Listen to the beats
And burn the streets
tell me what u think and if i can improve anything
Probaly should have put this in creative thread, my bad, if an admin could move it if they want
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Comments
emo??? really, fair enough, don;t really class them as emo
but i do see liberally lyrics, and anti estbilashment lyrics
everyones allowed their own opionon even if it is wrong :P
lol
nah i'm still writting lyrics but i've got more of my own style now, i think
"this system is killing us" and "fuck the rich"
There are better ways of making a class statement than that but yeh, all the best. Especially if you're doing live gigs, no one really knows or gives a fuck about the lyrics so as long as you're playing good music then go for it. :thumb:
:P
Keep on writing and eventually things will come to you and remember that most major musi artists write and rewrite songs before they are released
All in all not bad lyrics for a first attempt!
My bf writes lyrics and he's been doing it for years and he still has to re-write and re-write songs...so for a first go there not bad. You will become more developed over time!