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Poemio.

Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
Little.. Long, Poem.
Enjoy.

Growing Up
Grasping me with vigour, my head remains encased
Loneliness the central theme, my heart devoid of space
No room for such emotions, mutiny of the mind
No reason to be noticed, no matter just how kind

This darkness is pervading, the cloud above my head
With me when I wake up, when I return to bed
Reminders are incessant, their happiness it tears,
Into that weak willed mind of mine, it’s more than I can bare

Am I not deserving, have I not done enough?
Why must I continue, to deal with things so tough.
Everyone has their someone, to whom they mean the world,
My muse remains packed, all others are unfurled.

My patience is decaying, there’s not too much to spare
I try to act impartial, but I do, I really care
It cuts me whilst in uni, at work, at parties, at home
Why is it I continue, to always be alone

To others I’m impatient, “in time” they all do say,
But why must I, wait so long, whilst others have their way,
They HAVE their special someone; they KNOW that they are loved
That who they are is right and good, the hand to someone’s glove.

I'm told that by not searching, he'll be easier to find,
But i cannot see the impact of my silly little mind,
What i think is far from known to those that interest me,
it also has no impact, they judge on what they see...

Some proof is all I ask for, I beg, I plead, I cry
My transparency remains as they continue to deny.
Words they are so simple, with meaning or without
No conviction instilled within my mind, of that I have no doubt

I wish I could believe my friends, the statements they have made, but
Until some proof is given, I WILL remain afraid.
For the one thing that does scare me, that chills me to the bone,
Is growing up so quick, and growing up alone…

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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    do you feel lonely alice?
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I'd never be able to write a poem that good really. even though it is a bit depressing :(
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    I write poems to express how i'm feeling. Sorry, I am abit depressing at times, ill try be happy for you =]

    I'm home alone so yeahh... Bit lonely.
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Depressing art is normally easier to create. Nice rhythm
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    Former MemberFormer Member Posts: 1,876,323 The Mix Honorary Guru
    Hay. It is really good. I can write poems but not that good. Its great.
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